Preeettyy gooood
Okay i wont be mean , but i will be objective :
Im also 15 , and let me say that for being your first animation the drawings went quite well .
I liked the story , very sweet , killer and funny.
What i didnt liked was the music at the credits , and that the idea wasn't from you , but adaptations work , but be careful , because in newgrounds it can also be called , stealing.
Keep up the good work , see ya